Sunday, 23 April 2017

English Intensive Class




Appreciate, appreciate PORTMAN College to provide us English Intensive class during the long semester break without any tuition fees to improve our English. From the first day I join this English Intensive class, I am very appreciate and excited  because I know that my English is not good but this English Intensive class may help me to improve my English. Thank for the opportunity I can learn more from all the lecturers.

I am a person who afraid of English writing, I have no confidence to write a short an article, letter even a short sentences. In my mind, my English level is very low compare to my classmates, I don't think I can write in English. But after joining Intensive class for 2 weeks, I notice that actually I can write in English. And now, I would like to share my writing experience in the past 2 week.

Wednesday English Writing Skills tutorial class, Ms. Thinesswary conduct a group activity about write a poem with the title of "LOVE" and present in class. Some of the group wrote about the relationship between family, couples, or friends, every group have different perception on Love and different writing skills on the poem. However, my group has created a poem about love is Science.
Below is the poem that we wrote "Unconditional Love."
Hope you agree with it.

      Unconditional Love

Love is about Chemistry,
Combination of heart's elements,
Being pulled together by the force of attraction,
A compound is formed.

Love is about Physics,
Combination of hot and cold water,
Being poured into a cup to warm each others,
Thermal equilibrium is achieved.

Love is about Biology,
Combination of two genders,
Being hugged together without any worries,
Sense of security is felt.

Love is all about you and me!

Lastly, I would like to say thanks for spending your time to read it. Hope you will like it and please comment to point out my mistake, your comment may help me to improve myself. 

9 comments:

  1. Splendid sharing absolutely.

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    1. Thanks Seng Meng! I learned a new word from you!

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    2. Put into Vocab book HAHAHAHAH

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  2. Look forward to improve and grow together, good sharing love your LOVE POEM ! Haha

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  3. Awww Good​ Job Cheryl!👏
    I love it. But one small mistake you spelled Ms.Thineeswary.. it's Ms.Thinesswary.double 'SS'.😁✌

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  4. Wow! PORTMAN College really can change a person's life!!! I really love that poem and I do agree with you, love is about science. By the way, thanks for your sharing!

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  5. Wow, I like your "Unconditional Love" poem!

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  6. All about Loveeeeeeee~ Everyone deserves a love one! Nice poem and will share to my friends too~

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